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Whoa, this is a really cool and creepy design!

DatCakeIzEhPai responds:

Thanks m8, it isn't that really creepy to me when I draw him tho.

Your style is cute, but I feel like the punchline could have been...more.

What tremendous hindsight. :P

Shucks, I've been seeing lots of Wendy lately. Stupid Social Media, that I'm never a part of.

Okay, anyways, I like the pose, and the expression. Its a lot of attitude you show off here. The TV screens in the background was a good idea.

However, I don't like the extreme purple shading you did on the hand, sleeve, and dress, I think it looks weird and distracting.

I love his hilarious depraved expression. I guess that fireball was a real pain in his throat huh? The shading is pretty minimal, but it works out good here

critterfitz responds:

C; thanks

Hey, I remember seeing this on deviantart today, haha. Its still as delightfully gross on here. I like the details and shading, you did justice to the minions :)

The colors look like a nice pick. I like how you did the expressions. However, the dialogue text looks a little bit small for reading. Maybe you could have made some of the words in bold, to help your joke along?

I feel that you didn't use your space very wisely in the first two panels, having too much empty space at the top.

Otherwise, this is fine. I'm good with you using flat colors for this, and doing a vague blurry background, to keep it all simple.

You at least have a good grasp on light direction, but the ground shadows should be stronger. The body poses look too stiff. I don't care for the blank eye look myself. Maybe some more details could have went into the background, likes cracks and stains on the wall, or bits of litter on the ground to make the environment look more dingy?

I'm mainly a comic artist, but also do some fanarts, animal pictures, and I have a dumb butt card game project. Been on Devinatart for a long while but much less active there now. Used to write for Uncyclopedia and BWW.

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